Forgotten building

[i2iSTUDIOS]

http://sonton.smugmug.com/photos/40954040-L-1.jpg

Thoughts? Comments?

[habakuk]

This picture has a lot of potential, imo. Maybe try to crop it, or make it into four smaller pieces. As it is, there is a bit too much detail, so the eye is not attracted to one main object. And maybe crank up the contrast a bit? Other than that, I like the picture quite much.

cheers

[geecee]

B&W needs directional lighting. Go back again if possible on a sunny day and study the position of the sun at different times. Also concentrate on parts of the structure.