First DSLR Video - Subaru STI Looking for Feedback

[richflores1]

Hi All,
So I recently got a Manfrotto 561BHDV-1 Monopod since I was contemplating on practicing video. So I did a very short video on my Subaru Sti.

I'm looking for some feedback. Any and All will be appreciated.


http://vimeo.com/27406254

Thanks in Advance

[BryantFC]

Simple and effective, i like! Although I think if you did a bit of CC and grading it would've made it a bit better :)

[richflores1]

Simple and effective, i like! Although I think if you did a bit of CC and grading it would've made it a bit better :)

Thanks Bryant

[Photo99]

You need a hot babe in this...lol Nice job on the panning of the video I hope to see the continued vid.

Photo99

[richflores1]

You need a hot babe in this...lol Nice job on the panning of the video I hope to see the continued vid.

Photo99

Thanks Photo99,
I agree with you on what I'm missing. Maybe for the next one. :-D

[p6889k]

I like it, especially as a first DSLR video attempt.

[BrickR]

I liked that it actually did make me anticipate the next part. Simple and effective. Well done!

[Adamora]

God damn it! You pumped me up and it ended!

i hate you ._.

*Ps: Half life 2 music was a great touch ;p*

[jeffmurray]

Great video. I think in part ii we need to see the whole car. Great macro work with the monopod for a first attempt - you've got a steady hand and worked the Depth of Field well. Looking forward to part II.

[dolina]

Not a bad attempt. :)

[richflores1]

Thanks everyone, I really appreciate everyones feedback. I recently posted a 2nd DSLR video. Would appreciate feedback on that one too. :-D

I'm going to start plotting Part II of this for everyone. Now I feel the pressure!!