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walkien
25th of October 2005 (Tue), 01:45
C C are always welcome.

symes
25th of October 2005 (Tue), 02:55
I would say a couple of things on this one...

1. A very good first effort...
2. The shadow of her body takes away from the pic
3. The blur you have put on here doesn't work well with the pic...the candle looks like it is floating. I know what you are trying to do here but the blur is too harsh...
4. her expression is...well not glamourous...and you coul have really helped with the wrinkles and bags under the eyes...

Please don't take this too harshly but it is critiques like this that allowed me to learn from this forum...

please keep posting...

Cheers,

pez13
25th of October 2005 (Tue), 04:11
ya I'm not to crazy abou that blur its really distracting, maybe if it were done in a differnt way
have you tried neat images slighly out of focus filter? its pretty neat

heres an example of what it can do.

Keiffer
25th of October 2005 (Tue), 08:25
I agree with Symes, Good first effort but the blur is overdone. Keep up the good work:-)

walkien
25th of October 2005 (Tue), 18:12
I would say a couple of things on this one...

1. A very good first effort...
2. The shadow of her body takes away from the pic
3. The blur you have put on here doesn't work well with the pic...the candle looks like it is floating. I know what you are trying to do here but the blur is too harsh...
4. her expression is...well not glamourous...and you coul have really helped with the wrinkles and bags under the eyes...

Please don't take this too harshly but it is critiques like this that allowed me to learn from this forum...

please keep posting...

Cheers,


This is exactly what I want to hear. Thanks.

1shot4u
14th of November 2008 (Fri), 10:18
Superman or Spiderman..I like it.