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Kevin Doe
15th of November 2011 (Tue), 20:46
Critique welcomed. I'm new to the flash, and was trying different bounce techniques (while trying to entertain while my wife was gone).

My boys in their "motorboat". Bounced off the wall to camera right.
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6115/6348628167_c5c0c98ab9_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/kevindoe/6348628167/)
IMG_4880 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/kevindoe/6348628167/) by , on Flickr

My youngest. Bounced off the inside of a while laundry basket I placed to the camera left. I really like the sharpness of this one. I must have got the focus spot on.
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6114/6348627743_a6d29b93fc_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/kevindoe/6348627743/)
IMG_4848 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/kevindoe/6348627743/) by , on Flickr

whoty
16th of November 2011 (Wed), 02:11
I think you did a good job bouncing the light and balancing flash with ambient light. Had you not said u used a flash,I wouldn't have known.

NeutronBoy
16th of November 2011 (Wed), 05:56
The WB appears to be off - almost tungsten. #1 is a bit soft. On #2, if you can clone out the toys and stuff on the floor, it would help a lot. As pictures, I like them both, particlularly #2.