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James_Martin
11th of June 2003 (Wed), 01:26
http://elysians.rpgdesigns.net/MWards.jpg

http://elysians.rpgdesigns.net/MWards.jpg

One of the old montgomery wards department stores.
Leighow
11th of June 2003 (Wed), 19:21
I feel that there is just not enough subject matter here to retain my interest. Sorry.
RichardtheSane
12th of June 2003 (Thu), 10:37
Hi,

The composition idea works for me, I feel that my eyes are drawn towards the centre of the image to.....
Unfortunatly that is where the problem is, as the centre of the image doesn't have anything interesting to be drawn towards.
Pewterpez
12th of June 2003 (Thu), 18:02
yea, I fully agree about it, it's too much of a blank slate.

You need something in there...like a dazzling woman ;)

Anyway, here's some people I know from a trip to france, just a simple photochop :)

http://www.eviltangerine.com/uploaded/2003_162/photoshoppedBW.jpg

that one's B/W and here's a color one:
http://www.eviltangerine.com/uploaded/2003_162/photoshopped.jpg


EDIT: although there's now people, they're looking towards the center...hrm..need people looking AT you..oh well :-/