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smudge
27th of December 2005 (Tue), 18:23
Took this today very quickly, with a 20d, 17-40L and a 580ex. Thought it came out quite nice for a snap shot. So I gave it the full edit treatment.

What do you think... critique would, as always, be helpful.

http://pic15.picturetrail.com/VOL581/2631269/8745060/123149193.jpg

hybridwire
27th of December 2005 (Tue), 18:28
I really like it. if you wanted to do something else you could try and create a more abstract background as if you had a shirter depth of field. But I like it. good work.

kpiela
27th of December 2005 (Tue), 18:49
I love the lighting...and your friend is fabulous! :)

kawter2
28th of December 2005 (Wed), 00:28
great job on the eyes!!

smudge
28th of December 2005 (Wed), 07:25
Thanks guys, she is fabulous...this was a dress down day :), I would love to shoot her properly, but she'll have none of it. Lucky to get this.

Mfotography
28th of December 2005 (Wed), 08:33
great shot smudge... and my gyrl is the same way lol

Kevin
28th of December 2005 (Wed), 14:30
Nice shot. IMO I would try to remove the b&w wall that divides the center of her head.

Balliolman
28th of December 2005 (Wed), 15:46
I think the shot is too close ...