My Hello looking for constructive criticism

[ryuwulf]

Hi,
I am obviously new here so i welcome comments to become a better photographer. I introduced myself in the G3 forum. Here is my website, and please dont get alarmed by the butt loader in flash!!!!

Scroll down and you will see my work.

www.ryuwulf.net

Thanks and i look forward to hearing from everyone hear.


Cheers!!!!

[eland]

Hi
Thank you for inviting us to view your work.
You have an interesting gallery and clearly form and design
are very important to you. Light and shade and geometric patterns.

Your work is very good and very interesting.
Occasionally I felt that you might increase contrast or brightness a little,
but that is a personal thing.

Your shot in the urinal is a stopper.

You should have a much larger viewing audience in Critique Corner
than in the G3 forum.

And what's in a camera ?
It's only a tool.
You have shown that yourself as we cannot
tell your AE 1 work from that with the newer tool.

I hope you stay and show us more of your work.

Kind regards
eland

[rssfhs]

I like your work too! Was that boy's room shot staged, or is that one of those shemales you chanced across?

[TimNYC24]

welcome wulf,
your photos took so darn long to load (using cable modem) I didn't stick around to look at them.
your forum layout is an exact rip-off of the OutdoorEyes forum. I'm not a web designer, so maybe it's just a typical design everyone uses, but someone needs to be more creative :)

[ryuwulf]

eland:

Thanks. Im really trying to get into digital photography.
Ive finished all of my basics of photograpy BW 1 and 2, and history of . ive been a canon user since my AE1 and ive never changed. nice to meet you

TimNYC24 wrote:
welcome wulf,
your photos took so darn long to load (using cable modem) I didn't stick around to look at them.
your forum layout is an exact rip-off of the OutdoorEyes forum. I'm not a web designer, so maybe it's just a typical design everyone uses, but someone needs to be more creative :)

Um thanks. but i have no idea what Outdoor Eyes forum is and i thought i was being creative. i guess with so many other peeps out there some designs would kinda look the same. As for the download i optimized everything in photoshop, plus flash also compressed it further. I tested it out on a T1 line, and on a duddies DSL line. They both tested out great. So it should be good. I have rr myself and its great.

Thanks for the crit. looks like ill have to start from the drawing board.


rssfh:

Thanks. Yeah i did set the shot up in the restroom. Im still in college many of students are willing to pose. Thanks :)

[ryuwulf]

TimNYC24:
i just came back from that Outdoor eyes site.

My forum is a template that is standard when you set up a site with certain hosts(just like theirs). i just plugged in the fields. i wouldnt even know where to change the colors. oh well, and thanks for bringing that to my attention.

:)