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leaveit
17th of January 2006 (Tue), 08:11
Here is another of my filter trials...pls tell me if it works? Any suggestions would be great. Thanks. :)

Photo taken outdoors on a well lit day in the Botanical gardens Melbourne Australia.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y194/leaveit287/IMG_38151.jpg
jump
17th of January 2006 (Tue), 13:21
Nice shot, the only thing I notice is the distraction from the blown out background, a closer crop might have helped, but good shot.
Balliolman
17th of January 2006 (Tue), 13:48
Crop closer ... you have the classic tree growing out of the head shot! ;-)
Desertraptor
17th of January 2006 (Tue), 13:50
Gorgeous model, The camera likes her but hmmm the treeout the head ;)
What camera and settings. A shallower dof would help.
leaveit
17th of January 2006 (Tue), 19:17
Aha...very good point guys...i hadnt even noticed that! Thanks for the comments....and ill be sure too take note of composition next time (make sure the tree isnt growing out of the head...lol). ;)
Carzee
17th of January 2006 (Tue), 19:33
I'll chime in with the negatives re the tree and blown bkgrd and add one for the orange/yellow bits near the cleavage. And the horizon level... if you tilted it back to the left about 15 or 20 degrees then just cropped the head you might make a good pic out of it.
leaveit
17th of January 2006 (Tue), 20:03
I'll chime in with the negatives re the tree and blown bkgrd and add one for the orange/yellow bits near the cleavage. And the horizon level... if you tilted it back to the left about 15 or 20 degrees then just cropped the head you might make a good pic out of it.

Ill take the blown out background and the tree or sure....and ill reduce the saturation on the orange bench...but the horizon level was that exactly on the hill slope...if i tilted it back...the trees would look like they were dying over. But then again...if i crop...it might b a good idea. Im not sure...all im saying is that my spirit measure was close to spot on horizontal. But thanks for the advice. :D
leaveit
18th of January 2006 (Wed), 06:41
Here is an edited version...is this what u guys ment???

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y194/leaveit287/IMG_38153.jpg
Carzee
18th of January 2006 (Wed), 06:48
What I was trying to get over was that if you tilt the pic back to the left, her head goes back and then the close in crop will look better than a tight crop at the current angle.
leaveit
18th of January 2006 (Wed), 07:49
What I was trying to get over was that if you tilt the pic back to the left, her head goes back and then the close in crop will look better than a tight crop at the current angle.

Ahh i c...sorry buddy. Was a little confused. Ill give it a hit. Thanks again.