10D Pic

[Stoneh]

I like this picture, what do you think?

http://www.dialasif.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/Pages/10D/Sapha&ehsanSmall.jpg

[eland]

Hi Stoneh,
You are so fortunate to have two such lovely children to photograph.
This, like your previous (sepia) shot is charming.

I have a little question about the shoes. Certainly the pinkish shoe right on the edge of the image is a bit of a distraction. Perhaps I'd prefer the image without Azzi's shoes
right above Sapha's head ? They are easy to delete.

One last little point is the lack of flesh-tones on their faces. I might be tempted to add a little or I was even wondering
if this pic would work as a sepia along with the one of Sapha
on the little four-wheeler.

These are little points on a really charming study.

Kind regards
eland

[TimNYC24]

stoneh,
excellent composition,lighting and subjects :)
I have to agree with eland regarding the feet, not that it ruins the shot, but maybe could improve it.

[pappy]

This is a lovely photo, stoneh. I agree with all that's been said...you have beautiful children and you have captured them admirably. A photograph to treasure.

Regards,
Peter

[Stoneh]

Thnaks for the feedback, Sapha is lovely and im very fortunate to have her, she's very cheerful and always happy. The picture isnt perfect but with kids, its very difficult. You just never know when you are going to get that magical shot.

This forum is the only one I visit and I really appreciate the feedbacks, not just mine but everyone else's too as we can all see things from a diff point of view, learn and try to improve.

[Conk]

Very nice shot.
The feet don't bother me as much as the blown out area by his arm on the left. I can handle the bright sky behind too but the white shirts are a bit too bright.
I really really like the soft look on the faces and think the lack of flesh tones work in this case.