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adster13
16th of February 2006 (Thu), 03:00
Hi, I just found and joined this site. Haven't been doing photography for long. This is a pic i took in my home town of Melbourne, Australia. It is of a werid artistic piece across from Telstra Dome. Taken with my 350D stock lens.
Would really like some C&C, i have photoshopped it quite a bit and just wondering if i have overdone it.
condyk
16th of February 2006 (Thu), 03:19
It a little centred for my liking and all the light is towards the base so a tad too dark upper quarter. I kinda like it but there seems to be a counter-balance missing somewhere, but that will be in real life not just in your shot. I think it needs a small sheep or something on the ground and to one side.
Welcome BTW
DimensionZero
16th of February 2006 (Thu), 18:16
hah! i like it!
if only you could brighten up the sky a bit to add contrast between the cow and the sky it'd be great! It kinda looks like an illustration or something. Very surreal! :D
BottomBracket
16th of February 2006 (Thu), 21:18
It somehow looks like a scene from a diorama. Perhaps there should be something in the pic to give us a sense of the scale?
BIGTUFFGUY
16th of February 2006 (Thu), 23:55
would have liked it off to the side a bit, other than that looks good!
adster13
17th of February 2006 (Fri), 00:53
thanks for the comments all, i did a quick edit to make it a bit less centered...
does this look better?
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1944/cowintree44zo.jpg
BIGTUFFGUY
17th of February 2006 (Fri), 10:34
i think so,
the first one wasnt terrible though.
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