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NILOLIGIST
23rd of July 2003 (Wed), 20:37
Here is another in the Chair Series...

http://www3.pbase.com/image/19546281.jpg

NiL,
NILOLIGIST
23rd of July 2003 (Wed), 21:38
Thanks for the comments, both good and bad. LOL

NiL,
slejhamer
23rd of July 2003 (Wed), 22:01
You are on a roll with these interesting chair abstracts. This one is good too. I think you want this one to be perfectly symmetrical, but it appears you clipped the left side just a little bit.

It might be interesting to see these displayed together as a triptych, mounted with a simple white matte and black frame.
gandini
23rd of July 2003 (Wed), 22:52
With such a simple composition I find the lack of perfect symmetry too disturbing. Also the lack of depth of focus (and I know there must be quite a distance between back and seat) detracts from my enjoyment of this image. On photoSig I'd give it 1 red thumb.

thanks as always for posting,
NILOLIGIST
24th of July 2003 (Thu), 08:19
Ok,

Thank you all for the comments. I will just TRY again, no biggie.

It is very hard to get the both chairs in the entire frame. But I like my effort and what I was trying to do.

LOL

NiL,
getg3
24th of July 2003 (Thu), 16:11
Niloligist,

I like it. Well done!
pisco
24th of July 2003 (Thu), 17:02
niloligist wrote:
It is very hard to get the both chairs in the entire frame. But I like my effort and what I was trying to do.


Maybe you should try backing up a bit from the scene and then cropping to get the final result. This should allow you to get greater symmetry and to get the full scene you want in the picture.

I also agree with the poster who said this picture would benefit from great depth-of-field.

Great idea. I am curious to see the next iteration.
NILOLIGIST
24th of July 2003 (Thu), 23:56
getg3,

Thank you, I like it too. It is HARDER than my critics would like to think, with the lens I have but I didn't do it again, I just cropped the one I have again, here are the results...

http://www.pbase.com/image/19546281.jpg

NiL,
NILOLIGIST
24th of July 2003 (Thu), 23:57
Thank you all again, for the good posts and the not so good posts, it is all just our opinions and since I would like to get better, I appreciate everyone's opinion.

NiL,
mpaul73
25th of July 2003 (Fri), 03:46
NIL
You should crop it on the right hand side to make it as symmetrical as possible.

Regards
Martin.
NILOLIGIST
25th of July 2003 (Fri), 06:49
mpaul73,

Ok, I will do try that...Will post again soon.

Thnx,

NiL,
ryuwulf
25th of July 2003 (Fri), 09:26
Very nice selective focus.

me like a lot.
NILOLIGIST
25th of July 2003 (Fri), 10:19
ryuwulf,

Thank you, me like a lot too.

NiL,