More of Boko's photos. Do what u do best, critique!

[Boko Ono]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/Spazalicious/100_7317.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/Spazalicious/100_9581.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/Spazalicious/101_4097.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/Spazalicious/101_4694.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y171/herestothenights/scary.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y171/herestothenights/101_4103.jpg

[saravrose]

you have quite a few for critique but I'll give it a try...

1. i'm sure your intending for it to be very stylized but it just isn't working for me. The angle cuts off her mouth and really distorts the proportions of her features, it looks like one of those carnival sketches when the head is larger than the rest of the body, especially with that flower also not thrilled with the selective color.
I think that the third one is the best of the group allthough the light fom the left doesn't thrill me.. the fourth (infrared?) I think could be cropped a little tighter but I do like the composition, but probably better without quite soo much PP.. Hope this helps, atleast a little...

sari.

[Doom1701e]

yay boko! :)