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Veronica
31st of July 2003 (Thu), 11:40
My New G3 Gallery from Hawaii

Just got back from Hawaii and took my first pictures with my new G3.

Can anyone give me some feedback/pointers/criticism on my gallery below?

The link is www.pbase.com/irishgirl/oahu_vacation

http://genji.image.pbase.com/u25/irishgirl/upload/19830045.RainforestFlower.jpg

jinushaun
31st of July 2003 (Thu), 18:09
Love the aquarium shot, albeit a bit overexposed.

The beet salad is a great shot. Nice exposure. Looks like it came right out of a cook book. Just a little blurry though.

Diamond head is absolutely gorgeous. Excellent composition. Love the colour. Wish I was there.

God Light is an interesting shot. The sun rays are shot very well., and the silhouette of the man looking off the the see really adds to the whole mood. Was this posed? Otherwise, excellent timing/eye. However, the bloke wading in the water is quite a distraction.

Blowhole is another very nice shot, though I thik I might've shot it from a different location/angle.

GPR1
1st of August 2003 (Fri), 13:54
Some interesting shots. I would level the horizon in "God Light."