jinzou
8th of August 2003 (Fri), 23:20
I'm new to photography (as an art). I would really love your criticism on some(or all) of these pieces.
Butterflies:
- Wings Outstretched (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/wings_outstretched.jpg)
(added a sharpen filter and adjusted contrast and levels to desaturate the green)
- A Different Green (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/a_different_green.jpg)
(slight cropping, I'm not sure about the composition of this piece -- i need a fresh eye ;), added a slight smart blur to remove noise in dark areas)
- Edge of a Wing (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/edge_of_a_wing.jpg)
(I cut the wing out onto a different layer, applied a sharp filter to that so it wouldn't create more noise in the background. I desaturated some of the greens and pumped up the blues a little)
Flowers:
(these haven't been cropped, and the only editting would have been to add a sharpen filter)
- summer petals (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/summer_petals.jpg)
- challenging the sun (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/challenging_the_sun.jpg)
- honeysuckles hiding (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/honeysuckles_hiding.jpg)
- to the touch (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/to_the_touch.jpg) (I'm not sure how the composition looks on that one)
These were taken with the Powershot A60 at the Niagara Falls Botanical Gardens and Butterfly Conservatory.
Butterflies:
- Wings Outstretched (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/wings_outstretched.jpg)
(added a sharpen filter and adjusted contrast and levels to desaturate the green)
- A Different Green (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/a_different_green.jpg)
(slight cropping, I'm not sure about the composition of this piece -- i need a fresh eye ;), added a slight smart blur to remove noise in dark areas)
- Edge of a Wing (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/edge_of_a_wing.jpg)
(I cut the wing out onto a different layer, applied a sharp filter to that so it wouldn't create more noise in the background. I desaturated some of the greens and pumped up the blues a little)
Flowers:
(these haven't been cropped, and the only editting would have been to add a sharpen filter)
- summer petals (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/summer_petals.jpg)
- challenging the sun (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/challenging_the_sun.jpg)
- honeysuckles hiding (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/honeysuckles_hiding.jpg)
- to the touch (http://pixie.blackdaisies.com/pics/to_the_touch.jpg) (I'm not sure how the composition looks on that one)
These were taken with the Powershot A60 at the Niagara Falls Botanical Gardens and Butterfly Conservatory.