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Arie Rotshtein
31st of August 2003 (Sun), 02:31
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GPR1
31st of August 2003 (Sun), 10:06
I like this shot very much. Two suggestions: First, I'd crop out the top third of the sky; it's not adding anything, and the picture would be better balanced if it was gone. Second, at one point in the middle of the light lens it just fades into the clouds -- there's not definition for the boundry. That bothers me, but I don't know what you can do about it now. If a reshoot is possible, I'd pay attention to that. A reshoot might put you there when there are fewer clouds. I like the clouds, but a bit more blue would be nice.

My two cents worth.

new girl on the bloc
31st of August 2003 (Sun), 10:45
very cool - i like the asthetics of it just as it is.