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incendy
30th of April 2006 (Sun), 18:02
shot with a 580ex, 420ex and 35 1.4

really wish I would have taken the time to iron the sheet or put some paper up, but oh well... maybe I can photoshop it out

http://www.incendy.com/portrait-of-my-niece.jpg

chrishunt
30th of April 2006 (Sun), 18:34
I like the lighting on this! I'm not sure about the feet and the wrinkled ground, it might look cool with a close crop from about halfway up the forearm to the top of the head.

incendy
30th of April 2006 (Sun), 18:37
Like this burntbizzkit?
http://www.incendy.com/testing-umbrellas.jpg

chrishunt
30th of April 2006 (Sun), 19:40
I think I like the full frame shot better :o Thanks for humoring me :D

taramcg
30th of April 2006 (Sun), 19:53
That's a nice shot. Love the eye contact and expression. I agree ironing out the backdrop in PS would give the shot more impact. I would crop mid thigh. Great job!

incendy
30th of April 2006 (Sun), 21:24
is this better?
http://www.incendy.com/IMG_8133-2.jpg

Livinthalife
30th of April 2006 (Sun), 21:28
i agree with the ironing.. she certainly makes a great model! shes got the seriousness to her face. nice shot!

incendy
1st of May 2006 (Mon), 00:43
Thanks Livinthalife! she is a great model, but unfortunately she doesn't like getting her picture taken:) I tried to iron out the background in the last edit, does that look better?

chrishunt
1st of May 2006 (Mon), 00:45
I like your last edit. The crop and the background look nice.

cmpowell125
1st of May 2006 (Mon), 06:47
Here's my quick attempt.

Used a mask layer to adjust the contrast to blast the background out, use the clone tool a little to remove some of the larger creases.

Needs more work on the feet, but a little hard to be accurate with the low quality version.

Chris