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fattizzi
12th of September 2003 (Fri), 09:55
I took this in NYC with a Canon G3. I no longer have that camera as I moved up to a Canon 10D. Thanks in advance.
http://image.pbase.com/u33/fattizzi/large/21259264.CouplesittingBW.jpg
http://www.pbase.com/image/21259264/large
CyberDyneSystems
12th of September 2003 (Fri), 11:29
I like what you have done here. Very nice.
barnold999
12th of September 2003 (Fri), 12:41
hehe that is great... made me laugh, but I like the photo... no critique
new girl on the bloc
12th of September 2003 (Fri), 13:03
i too like this, nice capture. if it were mine i may crop it a bit tighter to emphasize your most interesting subjects.
KevinG3
12th of September 2003 (Fri), 19:43
I too like this pic. It almost looks sepia more than B&W unless my monitor or eyes are playing tricks on me. I would maybe sharpen it just a tad. But even without any further editing it is a nice picture. Good job!
k-j-m
13th of September 2003 (Sat), 07:11
Wow - great pic Fatizzi! Might want to crop in on the right just a tad - seems a little off centered, but otherwise I really like it! Good composition, great lighting, funny (love the man's expression!). I really like the fact that they are both wearing hats and you can only see the lower half of their faces.
Add this one to your portfolio!
kjm
Leighow
13th of September 2003 (Sat), 10:32
Frankly, to say the least, this woman's legs are not at all becoming.
While I am sure that no harm is meant here, I would encourage you to discard this image -- unless of course you have a signed release for same.
HOWIE
elm54
13th of September 2003 (Sat), 10:53
I like it. Was the original in color? If so I would like to see it . Just to see how your editing went.
Thanks
Eric
Conk
13th of September 2003 (Sat), 12:51
I also like this image. Personally I would crop the left side to leave the sunshine comming through the trees on the right.
Howie. I take it that you find the womans legs distastefull. I had not noticed this until you mentioned it. I think I can see where you are comming from with this. This is unfortunnate.
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