Stop and smell...

[tcguy519]

Looking for kind, constructive feedback.

[goatee]

It's a nice subject, and exposed well, but the composition is cluttered - it suggests you should perhaps be looking at the flower in the middle, but because there are so many other flowes in focus around it, it's hard to see.

Either, you need to get in closer to the flower that is your subject, or, go out wider, so you have a mass of flowers to look at and admire (possibly).

I'm not the greatest when it comes to taking interesting photos of flowers, but I hope that's given you at least some idea of how to improve it next time.

[bobscape]

I agree, you really need to decide what it is you are trying to capture in a shot like this. Its either a mass of bright colourful flowers or a single flower tightly framed. Its also very difficult to open flowers without making it look as though they are damaged and therfore unattractive.