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jbkalla
29th of May 2006 (Mon), 18:38
C&C, please. I thought this pic was so cute that I can't be objective about it!
It's my friends' kid. She'd just spent the last 20min jumping on the bed.
Lord_Malone
29th of May 2006 (Mon), 20:06
Such a sweet and innocent looking image. Nice, bro. ;)
jbkalla
30th of May 2006 (Tue), 10:56
Such a sweet and innocent looking image. Nice, bro. ;)
Thanks, LM!
I'm not sure the composition is great, and the background is a little distracting, but besides that: Any ideas on what I could have done better? Or what I can do to make this pic better?
cmpowell125
30th of May 2006 (Tue), 11:13
wow. I really like this photo. Nice DOF.
Mrs Smarty Pants
30th of May 2006 (Tue), 11:27
I think it's perfect.
ElectricHarmony
30th of May 2006 (Tue), 11:39
No objections here, It's absolutely darling!
jbkalla
31st of May 2006 (Wed), 07:35
Thanks everyone! I appreciate the comments!
So I guess I should leave the photo as it is, then?
damansidhu
31st of May 2006 (Wed), 11:50
Great photo John! I love the expression on her face. Regarding your comment about the background, how about some cloning of the white bed around her and a tighter crop so that all thats visible is white and her. Ill try and give it a shot and post up
jbkalla
31st of May 2006 (Wed), 22:14
Great photo John! I love the expression on her face. Regarding your comment about the background, how about some cloning of the white bed around her and a tighter crop so that all thats visible is white and her. Ill try and give it a shot and post up
Thanks, damansidhu!
Here's Mira after whitening the background. How would you crop it after this? Or did I overdo it?
damansidhu
31st of May 2006 (Wed), 23:08
Hi John,
Heres my quick take on the same, its basically the same as yours except that i kept some detail on the bed to get an idea of what shes lying on. I like your edit too but maybe the eyes became a little too soft i think after the gaussion blur-overlay twice, so maybe delete the eyes from the overlayed layer to get them sharp from the layer below?
jbkalla
3rd of June 2006 (Sat), 13:22
Hi John,
Heres my quick take on the same, its basically the same as yours except that i kept some detail on the bed to get an idea of what shes lying on. I like your edit too but maybe the eyes became a little too soft i think after the gaussion blur-overlay twice, so maybe delete the eyes from the overlayed layer to get them sharp from the layer below?
Ah hah! Thanks, damansidhu! I like that a lot. It takes away the distracting elements...
shniks
4th of June 2006 (Sun), 07:33
Great photo, I like the original, and Daimansidhu's one isnt bad either. I love her pose, and the bright background actually works very well. Your friend must love it!
Livinthalife
4th of June 2006 (Sun), 07:35
nicely done! The colors certainly pop! The softness is a great match for her also. Great work
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