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ctgoldwing
1st of October 2003 (Wed), 20:50
I came home the other day after a rain & found my hibiscus blooming on the deck. Had to get a step ladder to take this pix, lol.
As alway, I would appreciate ANY constructive criticism!
10D 100mm f2.8 macro @ f8 1/45 sec iso 200
http://www.molaver.org/photos/misc/img_4024s.jpg
Mark Kemp
2nd of October 2003 (Thu), 03:50
A good macro. Vivid and punchy and sharp from the front to the centre. very impressive, especially as you were up a ladder at the time.
Its just going out of focus on the stamens but I think you got away with it!
You could perhaps crop a little of the green background from the left, but not much or the flower will be too central.
pwen watkin
3rd of October 2006 (Tue), 21:22
It's very good...I like it.
Livinthalife
3rd of October 2006 (Tue), 21:27
Your subject is absolutely amazing!!! The ONLY thing I can say i wish the BG wasa more smooth...But I don't think there was a way around that since you were on a ladder! Great work!
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