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bell
9th of October 2003 (Thu), 08:46
I took this picture a few days ago and have almost deleted it multiple times, but when I look at it closer I can't do it. My question is does this picture hold anyones interest for more than a second? I'm so torn...

http://www.lynettesphotos.fotopic.net/photo.php?id=1403118

stopbath
9th of October 2003 (Thu), 10:07
Not much appeal as it is, but keep it as a reminder for future shots. A similar lonely tree (a long the beach) without the playground would be nice, or a few kids swinging on these swings would make a nice photo.


Be careful of the horizon when shooting. The horizon here is tilted. Although an easy edit fix, try to watch for this while checking your composition in the finder.

Leighow
9th of October 2003 (Thu), 20:47
I love the colors -- but the composition is weak.

The only way that I can see strengthening same ( the exact same) is to (I think) retake with the tree on the far right and try to shoot even a longer stretch of beach and keep the left to right movment and have it end up on the distant tree.

Anyway checkout the Kodak site for tips re composition.

HOWIE