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shuttermom
23rd of June 2006 (Fri), 18:18
This is our newest addition--you guys seem so friendly here. I'm working on my BW conversion method-- do we like? Would you change something?

nicola's images
23rd of June 2006 (Fri), 18:33
He is absolutely sweet...beautiful eyes. I like the lighting in the second one better. I find the blanket above him in the first one a little bright which distracts from your son. Good work though!

lightwrite
23rd of June 2006 (Fri), 20:09
He's so cute! Nice captures....a little too bright for my taste, but cute expressions. Maybe add a little more contrast to the b/w conversion. Thanks for sharing....and congratulations on the new baby!:D

kelvel
23rd of June 2006 (Fri), 22:41
He is very sweet, #1 is my favorite, just a little too bright. I agree with lightwrite a bit more contrast would improve it.
He's skin looks dreamy

shuttermom
23rd of June 2006 (Fri), 23:44
thanks for the feedback everybody. i toned downt he brightness and bumped up the contrast (also dodged the background a bit) improvement?

kelvel
24th of June 2006 (Sat), 00:37
The detail in his face is better but i am finding the darkness at the top of his head distracting, hope you don't mind i had a play. I only know basic pp and used curves brightness/contrast and a crop or 2. I naturally crop quiet tight in my photos and don't think you always need the whole head [his eyes need to be the focal point]
If something could be done with the dark crease next to his right cheek above his shoulder, would be even better.. [i have no idea how to use those tools]

Kelly
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g144/visblis/quinn1aa.jpg
or even a tighter crop
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g144/visblis/quinn1bb.jpg

kelvel
24th of June 2006 (Sat), 00:40
not sure why my edit came out so big, lost alot of detail , sorry but you get the idea of the crop.
K

dave_borg98
24th of June 2006 (Sat), 09:15
I like the last one you did better. That blanket was quite distracting. Very cute kid. And great captures.

photojag
24th of June 2006 (Sat), 13:49
Very cute kid .. I like the toned down version the best.. congratulations