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davekone
14th of October 2003 (Tue), 09:42
Opinions please.

http://upload.pbase.com/davekone/kids

Leighow
15th of October 2003 (Wed), 14:58
DAVE


Depends what you want to know. As family record shot it is really quite terrific . Period !
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But if you want to get artsy, and purer as another member Eland preaches place a sharper eye on your S = subject, L = light, and R = rubbish. This could be a prize winner (IMHO) if ...

R = the kids were isolated against just the lawn ( the garbage can and bay window add a context for your family (and maybe us too!) but may be distracting

L = the light is great -- but sunligt and backlighting might add more mood, and

S = Great activity that we have all enjoyed. Pretty neat, but you might be able to home in more on the faces -- if the background were to change.

Here is one very rough look in that direction. Even so, what you have taken is pretty darn nice too !

HOWIE

http://members.rogers.com/hleigh/KIDS.jpg

davekone
15th of October 2003 (Wed), 15:43
I wish the trashcan was not there as well. So I should erase the background and put them on a nice green field!

Sometimes when I take shots like this I'm wondering if its worth it to have a realistic background of the average home, or try to make the picture someting else.

I appreciate al your comments!

thanks

David

xxlt
15th of October 2003 (Wed), 20:56
davekone~~Hello :)

I'm impressed ...the skin colors are terrific. The sharpness is dead perfect looking @ my monitor.
Thanks for posting...it gives me hope that if I keep learing mine will turn out as well ...some day. :)

bill from Ohio w/D300