6-24 wedding

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Here are some photos that I have taken at my last wedding on June 24th. I just have a few ready to post (most of the photos are not on my computer hard drive and don't have the rest with me at the moment). But i wanted to get some posted soon so i could start getting some feedback. Enjoy!

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some more...

[dsze]

...like #1 alot.

[liza]

I really like #2 and #4. The portrait is lovely.

[sageone]

great portrait. B&W conversion is great.

[tim]

#1 - nice pose, you need to pay more attention to the background.
#2 - underexposed, lacks contrast, and guy on right looks to separate to group. It will be a nice photo when the basics are fixed.
#3 - see #1
#4 - it's ok.

Your B*W conversions lack punch. Do your levels and add contrast, but you'd be better off doing them again using the channel mixer then adding contrast.

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thanks for the comments everyone! and time, i see what i need to work on and agree with your comments. i will post some more very soon for you all to take a look at.

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hey all, i finally have some more wedding photos posted from the june 24th wedding. www.markcoffman.net/Chris_Tasha.htm (http://www.markcoffman.net/Chris_Tasha.htm) just follow that link.