Spontaneous shoot C&C

[savone]

I met a new friend and she was willing to sit for me. These were shot with my Tamron 28-75 2.8 and 550ex for fill.

C & C PLEASE! :)

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More here:

http://savona.smugmug.com/photos/84022748-L.jpg

http://savona.smugmug.com/photos/84022879-L.jpg

I really need some input so I can improve, thanks!

Steve

[Art Rodriguez]

Like the DOF on the first one. I really don't like the one were she is blinking her eye. But that is just my opinion. It seems like something is wrong with her eye. The other three look pretty good to me.

Art

[savone]

Thanks Art, the last one was just a fun shot. I agree but if you knew her you would say it fits her personality.

Anyone else I would appreciate any comments.

[Titus213]

Very nice posing, light and framing. Colors are good and the focus/DOF is wonderful. Not sure about that wink either but overall a real nice set of images.

[roman_t]

i like second shot but i'd turn fillflash aside. very nice model and posing. i'd leave black top on her only if its not so cold outside. try those images in b&w - you ll like it.

[Elbee19]

Good captures! The fill flash was a great idea, however it appears to be a bit too strong on the second shot. On my monitor I am noticing slight hot spots on her forehead, around her eyebrows, and her cheek bones. I love the pose and smile in the second photo!

Thanks for sharing!;)