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[Reluix]

Tell me what you think, muchly appreciated, first time poster in this section.

[Unreal_Nature]

If you would push your tones a little harder, I think it might be more effective. The composition/arrangement is nice, though, it's pretty hard to get excited about a styrofoam cup.

You seem to have a good eye for abstract configurations of line and shape.

-Julie

[storeman]

If you would push your tones a little harder, I think it might be more effective. The composition/arrangement is nice, though, it's pretty hard to get excited about a styrofoam cup.

You seem to have a good eye for abstract configurations of line and shape.


What she said :)

[Athena]

I like the composition and the lonely feeling the photo projects. I do agree with Julie's contrast boost - really brings out the texture in the cement and gives the image more punch. On its own its not outrageously exciting, but I think it would be great as part of a series.

[Reluix]

Alright, thanks, ill keep that in mind, and i was thinking maybe doing a series of it as well.

[Smooth1]

I like it. The fact that you can see what appears to be the outline from a spill stain tells me it's more than just a styrofoam cup. :)