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jojacos
30th of July 2006 (Sun), 04:16
My first picture taken with my new 24-105L lens with 430EX bounce flash. Taken in RAW. No PP on the picture :)

Critique would be greatly appreciated!

http://www.azmilkhalili.com/gallery/Children/Afif/slides/IMG_1959.JPG

EXIF DATA: CAMERA: Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL | DATE: 28/07/06 21:51 | ISO SETTING: 200 | EXPOSURE TIME: 1/30s | APERTURE: 4.0 | FOCAL LENGTH: 47.0mm

Unreal_Nature
31st of July 2006 (Mon), 06:07
He looks like a real little rascal. Both hands are ready to go to work...

-Julie

cassarilda
31st of July 2006 (Mon), 06:22
Nice shot, but I would love to see all of his hand.

When you stick it into PS, try vignetting the edges just a little bit (nothing too dark or dramatic) just to make his face the lighter area in the shot... eyes are drawn to the lighter area of an image, and in this case its the carpet.

Oh and just clean up that dot near his head, and the shadow at the top of the frame.