First shoot with a model -CC's welcome

[vutown]

Guys,

I've been a long time reader and finally grew some courage to post some recent shots of a model I was working with. Any CC are welcomed.

-Thanks,
Vu

[Lin-z]

I like the first one best. They are both nice. I just really like the expresion and the was she is turned in the first one.

[INF SQD LDR]

I would crop the first one a little more. Maybe even portrait orientation.

Nice work.

[BLINN]

the first one is not flatterning to her at all...it makes her look very wide shouldered...and her spare tire pops out at you..the second one is better however I am not keen on her armpit area...shadows or growth (hair) or somthing not right...but better the the first one...

[monter]

I like 2 better than one, but you can see some of her bra (?) on that one. Next time just make sure all is tucked :)

[dbernard]

I agree with previous comments. Fix the peeking bra and the underarm. The lighting/whitebalance is a bit off too. She looks a little pale. The photo looks a little washed out. Need to compensate a little for the cool color of a cloudy day.

[basroil]

I like 2 better than one, but you can see some of her bra (?) on that one. Next time just make sure all is tucked :)

i concur on that. nothing stands out more than a white bra.. well, maybe a red one (but when we see those in pics, they are usually supposed to be there)

[vutown]

Thanks for all the comments. I definitely learned a few things from each of your post.


I'll definitely keep the "spare tire" concept in mind - I was more concerned with the sun, etc. Also, the bra and the arm pit comments were very useful.

Strange thing was, I ran the 2nd photo thru Photoshop, gave it some color, but when saving and uploading, it didn't turn out as I thought it would be.

thanks,
Vu