second time as a second shooter.. did I improve?

[monter]

Well I got another chance to be a second shooter. I feel I learned a lot between times. I would love some C and C. I know I can improve further, just need some advice as to how. I followed Tim's advice and took more face shots. any other advice would MUCH appreciated. Thanks in advance!

A couple of the bride

#1
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/emtterry/_MG_3412-sfw.jpg

#2

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/emtterry/_MG_3351-sfw.jpg
Bride and son

#3
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/emtterry/_MG_3388-sfw.jpg

#4
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/emtterry/_MG_3389-sfw.jpg

Some details

#5
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/emtterry/_MG_3473-sfw.jpg

#6
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/emtterry/_MG_3377-sfw.jpg

#7
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y216/emtterry/_MG_3306-sfw.jpg

[tim]

I don't remember your first shots so I can't say if you've improved, but I can comment on these ones.

#1 - funny facial expression, like she's been smiling at the camera for too long. It's a bit warm too, turn the color temp down or make it B&W.
#2 - doesn't do anything for me, I can't see her eyes.
#3 - see #2
#4 - nice one of the little boy, i'd be tempted to crop her out if she wasn't the bride
The rest - nothing wrong with them. Be careful of your exposure, especially the last one is a bit underexposed.

I think critique from the main photographer at the wedding would be useful for you too :)

[Su-Hannie]

It looks good, but the only thing that I see is that you used her looking down quite a bit, in a fuller frame bride you do get the double chin. Not too bad in this pics, but look at it in the future.

The shots of the flower/cake is very good

[paul33]

A little over-saturated to my eyes but some nice shots there and for a second effort, definitely heading the right way fast !

[monter]

thanks guys for the honesty. It's the only way I can improve. this bride was NOt having a good day so trying to get a natural smile from her was a trick. I tired to joke with her and make her laugh, but the power of her mother was just too much. I will post one more in a bit that I took from above to eliminate the double chin.

And Tim, trying to get feedback from the pro is like pulling teeth. He likes my stuff and doesn't critique me much. I know I need some help. that's why I post here for some feedback. I appreciate it very much.