Broken

[cmpowell125]

Another from today...

C&C welcome.

20D & 17-40 F4

Thanks

Chris

http://www.chrispowellphotography.com/gallery/albums/2006/2006_08_Rural_Cotswolds/2006_0808_163706.IMG_0051-01-small.jpg

[Stavhp]

i really like hte composition of this picture, leads teh eue righ intop the pic
However the cat eye at teh bottom of the frame is kinda distracting, maybe a crop?

[cmpowell125]

Thanks.

The broken car eye was supposed to be the focus, but dont think it really worked out as I was hoping.

Maybe ill try cloning it out, see what it looks like.

Chris

[cmpowell125]

Which do people prefer. Im not sure about this one, looks like there is something missing. But that could just be me.


Chris

[theague]

looks better. I can, however, see the same set of lines 3 times in the image now. Had I not known what the original looked like I'd probably never know to look there though so I think you're ok. :) My eye is no longer drawn to the bottom of the photo but rather I am lead toward the top.

Looks a lot better imho.

[Stavhp]

looks better. I can, however, see the same set of lines 3 times in the image now. Had I not known what the original looked like I'd probably never know to look there though so I think you're ok. :) My eye is no longer drawn to the bottom of the photo but rather I am lead toward the top.

Looks a lot better imho.
Yeah, i also like this one better, nice job


Stav

[stupot]

dodgy cloning;) but i prefer the second.

[cmpowell125]

Ok, so is the cloning any better in this one. I rushed the other one.

[GreatNorthWood]

Sorry but the first one is WAY better - there's absolutely no focus or interest for the eye at all in the second one. Stick with your original idea – it works.