Question

[AspiringPhoto]

I am working on paperwork and postcards and such and came up with this to use as a business logo. What do you think?

Business name: Aspiring Photography

[Zilly]

i read it as just A

JMHO

[KAS]

I agree...I just saw the "A" maybe make the P more pronounced or predominant....perhaps just more powerful or punchy :)

Cheers
-Kirk

[AspiringPhoto]

How is this?

[KAS]

better...although I'm not sure the A will look like an A to everyone on first glance. Maybe extend the "thick stick" of the A a little further (parallel to the stick of the P). ....And then make the line that goes up from that thinner.

Maybe I'm just crazy, though

-Kirk