Amanda

[Esquire]

http://www.pbase.com/lighttalker/image/66235709.jpg

Shallow DoF. Taken in a narrow alley, Charlotte Amalie, St. Thomas, U.S.V.I.

[jbkalla]

Beautiful model!

DOF maybe a little too shallow? Only one eye in focus. Plus, it's a little hazy, I think...

[PEACHMAN]

a nice face but the photo needs some work./a little more focus on the eyes especially...the light is a tad blownout but could probably be saved with levels or curves. There could be some cropping done to the left and the fly away hairs might be cleared away with cloning...other than that, nice work! may I do some work to show you what I mean?

[PEACHMAN]

as I see Image editing is allowed please allow this offering of a suggested aqdditional metheod of displaying this image,,,if it offends I will remove it immediatly!

[Esquire]

Thanks for posting your version. I like the "softness" of the original image, but welcome edits of my work.

[dallas_mike]

maybe you can try black - and - white prints, the girl's face will be more velvety.