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lippy113
4th of September 2006 (Mon), 12:41
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Shot the Mill from the Wedding venue on Saturday 1st Sept 2006. The sun was creeping up behind me from the left....... C&C welcome.

Canon 30D
Canon 17-55 2.8 IS USM
Mode AV
TV 1/400
AV 5.0
ISO 200
Focal Length 17.0mm
Olli
2nd of October 2006 (Mon), 06:35
Lippy, there are a couple of things I would do with this picture. Firstly, to take a few steps to right (or several to the left to show the steel ladders), to use the tree as a frame and reveal a bit more about the wall of the mill. Also I would try to find something where to attach my eyes, some sort of interesting detail. (Those green plastic chairs are a good candidate :) Also the horizon seems to be a bit tilted. - My 2 c.
fi20100
2nd of October 2006 (Mon), 14:46
:( The photo isn't showing up for me... gonna check a bit later.