A few shots of Victoria

[Shutter22]

Very interesting shots.

Welcome to the forum!

[Benji]

Very well lit, and a beautiful young lady. There are a few minor posing problems in all of them but all in all a very nice set of images. Some people don't want any one "picking apart their pix" so before I do, do you mind?

Ben

[ajbalazic]

Welcome! Nice shots- I like the first one best. Something about the pose. Lighting is a little dark perhaps.

[Benji]

Thanks Shutter,

First of all these are VERY WELL lit, exposure could not be better, and she is absolutely beautiful. You have done a wonderful job.

I attempt to base all of my critiques on my nearly 25 years of experience as a professional photographer and having watched hundreds of images (mine and others)critiqued at PPA professional judging by masters of photography.

# 1. I wonder if drawing her back leg behind the front leg (instead of how you have it) would help slenderize her legs and the overall base of the image a bit? I'm not sure. One would have to do two of them and then compare them side by side.

# 2. Her shoulder is turned too far away from the camera. 45 degrees is the norm. I'm wondering why the heavy shadows at the base of the image?

# 3. Her right hand is posed perfectly, but her left hand is flat and large. I think had she "sucked in her tummy" right before the capture she would have had a smaller tummy, bigger breasts and looked several inches taller, all things every woman wants!!!!

# 4. I like except the crop on her right arm is at her elbow.

# 5. I LOVE the way you posed her legs, VERY NICE, VERY NICE INDEED!!! In fact the pose is VERY NICE. My only nit pic is her left hand should have been on top of her left leg instead of on the camera side of it and (again) I think if she had "sucked in the tummy" (read # 3 again) and leaned slightly away from the camera (over her left leg) it would have given more of a "flow" to her torso.

I'm done! Good job on these.

Benji

[Sp00ks]

I like them all personally. Georgous model. However, I think she looks better in red and wish her arm wasn't so cut off in #4. Not to mention it just looks painful :)

[calicokat]

Nice shots, I like #4 the best

[1grayman]

Hey It's teeja vue all over again!

[djengizz]

Very nice shots and i love the lighting.
I would agree with your favourite if the shadow was a little less harsh. Now i go for #3.
Good work.

[jtmorales]

Hey It's teeja vue all over again!

haha...glad I'm not the only one who noticed.