(take 2) Recent Rock / Pop Punk Gig Shoot

[M0NK3H]

OK my server is no-longer dead so lets try again. ;)

I metioned being asked to cover my friends gig a while back and asked for advice which has came in handy on more than one occasion.

Please visit my site to check the shots out. (LINK) Shutter FX.co.uk (http://www.shutterfx.co.uk)

All feed back will be much appreciated, and if you read my post on my site it will explain slightly more how i found the expirance. :D

(comments left on my site are always appreciated but not nesscary ;))

[M0NK3H]

Please dont consider this a bump... more a life-line. :D
-More on my site. ;) C + C welcome and advice.

http://www.marcorchard.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/Shutter_FX/INT_04-09-06/INT_04-09-06_01.jpg

http://www.marcorchard.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/Shutter_FX/INT_04-09-06/INT_04-09-06_07.jpg

[DwightMcCann]

Michael is looking for some feedback, too: http://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthread.php?t=213621. My opinion is that the first should be cropped much tighter ... the ceiling and space to right add nothing. In the second, the guitar head and drummer's head are a distraction. In general, get rid of everything that isn't essential. Also, the watermark is a bit much ... perhaps it would be a good use of the empty space rather than over people.