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abbarr
8th of December 2003 (Mon), 01:40
Hi All,

I spent Saturday night wandering around the Bay Area giving my new 24-70L a workout. Wondering if anyone has enhancement ideas on the linked image. Seems a bit dark, but lightening seemed to strip the feeling from the shot.

Please feel free to comment on any of the shots in the series.

Thanks for your time.

Alan.

Dock of the Bay (http://www.me.berkeley.edu/ergo/SanFranciscoBayAreaatNight/sfbaydocknightweb.html)

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martcol
8th of December 2003 (Mon), 02:37
Hi Alan

This is with a pretty wild Curves adjustment using an adjustment layer with a layer mask which masked off the sky and most of the water....

http://images.fotopic.net/?id=1931018&outx=600&oq=0

Hope you don't mind my fiddling but I thought I would have a go... I'm not sure if it adds much to the image though and in fact, this certainly isn't the best in the gallery in my view.

Oh, and I dream of L lenses!

Martin

abbarr
8th of December 2003 (Mon), 02:45
Thanks Martin.

I love what it did to the wall, but not what it did to the water. I'll mess with Curves a bit myself.

Would you mind telling which in the gallery you prefer?

Cheers,

Alan.

ps. i'm now in serious debt over L lenses :)

martcol
8th of December 2003 (Mon), 07:31
No problemo

The 2nd & 3rd shots (the sky in the 2nd is a treat) and the last in the album/series. I also like the Crane/moon shot but for me, the composure is not quite right though as always, I hesitate to say what would make it right! If pressed, a bit more at the bottom and a bit less at the top?

The PS adjustment only took a couple of seconds by the way, you could get better results with more care!

Overall, lovely photos! Enjoy that L glass!

Martin