some criticism or something

[brantfordbandit]

i've posted twice with no responses, a little encouragement or criticism would be great.

[marions]

ok

[wayne_eddy]

i've posted twice with no responses, a little encouragement or criticism would be great.

The composition of this sentence is direct and leads the eye from left to right.

One might consider using some aliteration, imagery or metaphor to make the subject a little less obvious to the reader.

:) :) :)

[henry_b]

The composition of this sentence is direct and leads the eye from left to right.

One might consider using some aliteration, imagery or metaphor to make the subject a little less obvious to the reader.

:) :) :)

LOL !!!!!!! LOL!! heheheh cant stop laughing!! :D

[tlc]

i've posted twice with no responses, a little encouragement or criticism would be great.


congrats on the two times posting!

:p