Barbwire

[Loni]

Would like some critique on this one!

http://static.flickr.com/94/243278613_d1f7489d15.jpg

[fmj200x]

The barb wire look a little dart at least to me. Have you tried to make it a little lighter to find some more detail? Erik

[triumph]

Interesting idea with the wire behind, several suggestions to add impact
1] It may add more interest if the "barb was off-centre ( on a third)
2] I would prefer that the wire behind did not intersect with the barb.
3] the barb was less of a silloette and had more detail.

[StewartR]

I would echo triumph's comments and add:
4] It might be better of the background barb were slightly less OOF.
5] A mixed blue/white sky is better than plain blue or plain white, so next time a bit less cloud and a bit more blue sky would help.

[Unreal_Nature]

I kind of like the composition. I don't like the coloring.

Barbed wire is nasty - cold, harsh, meant to inflict pain. It shouldn't be photographed against fluffy clouds and pastel blue.

The rotational/twisting shapes remind me of a swarm of bees traveling from left to right across the frame. I like that.

-Julie

[crackerbee2]

I think I would like it more if the back piece of barbed wire was a bit more in focus.