Three from my last shoot

[floydianslip6]

Please be as rough as you want to be.

http://www.UrbanEden.ws/hosted/sample1.jpg


http://www.UrbanEden.ws/hosted/sample2.jpg


http://www.UrbanEden.ws/hosted/sample3.jpg

[shuttermom]

I like #1 and #3--nice job with the light. #2 lacks something---can't put my finger on it..maybe a more interesting angle?? Perhaps if you crouched down a bit and used the chair backs to create a crashing focal point in the photo. Nice work!

[floydianslip6]

Heres an alternative angle for #2, sorry for the different size:

http://www.urbaneden.ws/urban/locations/Norwich/galleries/Entranced/images/img7.jpg

[Wildewinds]

I like #1. The exposure is spot on.

I don't find #'s 2 and 3 to be very interesting, although #3 is the better of the two.

[michaelbehlen]

I have to say that 1 and 3 are really excellent shots. I love number 1, very creepy. Looks like it belongs in Silent Hill ect. Great great work!

[madchadder]

I love #1, though I wonder if it could be brightened a little while still retaining that dark, claustrophic atmosphere.

#2 doesn't do anything for me, though I like the replacement photo a little better.

#3 is nice because of the contrasting bleakness inside with the bright colors outside. I would try cropping more off the top and bottom and also center the windows.

[Cathpah]

these are great....where did you take these? I just love them. how did you find out about this place?

Also, if you could go back, i think this location could be a PERFECT spot for doing HDR (high dynamic range) shots. If you don't know what they are, look them up....but basically it's just taking an overexposed shot, a correctly exposed shot and an underexposed shot and combining them to avoid blown out highlights, overly dark shadows, and underexposed/overexposed spots that you'd like to bring out. It can be really cool. Check out some of of the HDR work done potn member "dr. flynn" by doing a thread search.

[tania622]

i like the 3rd pic