musico

[freefallu]

This guy asked me to do some shots for him for his band website. I would welcome comments and criticism to see what I can learn. Our studio was in the corner of a small room and my back is pressed to a wall. I had two brolleys with me. The main thing i see is to practice more with light ratios between one and the other. 1-4 is with 1 light and 5 is with 2. I think i should have sent twice as much light to the subject from the left as the right.. after all some shadow is good ?

1.

http://www.freefalluniversity.co.uk/lola/cia1.jpg

2.

http://www.freefalluniversity.co.uk/lola/cia2.jpg

3.

http://www.freefalluniversity.co.uk/lola/cia3.jpg

4.

http://www.freefalluniversity.co.uk/lola/cia4.jpg

5.

http://www.freefalluniversity.co.uk/lola/cia5.jpg

[bwolford]

DOF is off and the guy needs to wipe his face. Most seem under exposed.

[jaymrobinson]

The first picture is the best. I like where you are going with that one. The other ones could use some better lighting. This guy seems like he would work well with more dramatic lighting.