Does this work?

[JadeL]

This is from a wedding a few weeks back (the same one I posted the flower girl pictures from). I am not sure if this picture is doing anything for me. I have some of them from the front-more posed & looking at the camera- but I wanted to try this variation. Everyone here has such honest opinions I wanted to ask does it work? Suggestions and comments would be great!!!

[Woogie]

just a quick question - is this an original or is this a crop?

[RachaelSilvers]

What was your DOF when you shot it? Just you soften it with PP? It doesn't excite me b/c it's very monotone and my eye is having a hard time picking out the focus of the shot.

I like the idea of them from behind with the sign but I think the composition (smidge to far too the right) and DOF are off and making it less exciting to look at.

[JadeL]

Woogie- This is not a crop.
Rachael- It was taken at f5, 1/200sec on iso100 the focal length was 121mm.
I did not soften it I actually used USM on the couple. Maybe it is the DOF being off.
Thanks for the input!