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Mr B Snappy
15th of October 2006 (Sun), 14:45
One of my better attempts so far, I'm interested in finding out what you think and how you'd improve it.
Sp00ks
15th of October 2006 (Sun), 16:58
I love the colors. I think the composition could be a little different. I'm trying to think of suggestions on composition......
A couple of things. The sailboat is sailing out of the frame. The breaker wall is almost centered in the shot.
Overall, I like the shot and thanks for sharing.
Elisabeth-Ann
15th of October 2006 (Sun), 17:08
Great colours, I think it would be more interesting if you took the shot looking down towards the water along the breaker, rather than at it. Hope that made sense:confused:
Mr B Snappy
15th of October 2006 (Sun), 17:54
Great colours, I think it would be more interesting if you took the shot looking down towards the water along the breaker, rather than at it. Hope that made sense:confused:
I can see what you mean, portrait format maybe. There'd be no boat in that though and I thought maybe that added a bit more interes.t
Mr B Snappy
15th of October 2006 (Sun), 18:01
I love the colors. I think the composition could be a little different. I'm trying to think of suggestions on composition......
A couple of things. The sailboat is sailing out of the frame. The breaker wall is almost centered in the shot.
Overall, I like the shot and thanks for sharing.
If I'd been a bit quicker spotting the shot I could have got the boat sailing into the frame... Fortunately I'm the owner of two small children and this was quickly taken whilst trying to stop the youngest from eating the beach! Composing to get it sailing into the shot would have meant losing the sea on the shore and more sand. But again I do see what you mean. Thanks for the comments.
weemannie
16th of October 2006 (Mon), 10:05
COmpositionally, its already been commented on. I like the colour of the breakwater very much. :D
Happisburgh is a lovely spot, such a pity that the powers that be have decided to leave nature to destroy it through erosion :(
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