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gail
7th of January 2004 (Wed), 11:00
So what do you think? I'm doing better at the focus part I think, I moved my ISO, to 200 for this shot. Of an eye ball LOL. :lol:


http://members.aol.com/gail4ev/eye.jpg

emartin
7th of January 2004 (Wed), 16:52
Pluses and minuses (my humble opinion only, please take as constructive criticism)

- Eyelashes are cropped at upper right hand corner of picture.

- Part of the eyebrow is showing and detracts from the subject (the eye, I assume)

- Color saturation a little low. When shooting color, either punch it way up, punch it way down, or do black and white. "Normal" color is boring these days... everybody does it.

+ Your focus is good.

Tips:
What is your subject? Decide what it is, and include only elements in your picture that will enhance the subject, not detract from it.

Cheers,
E. Martin

timmyquest
7th of January 2004 (Wed), 16:54
This pic is a must with any new camera :P

here is my brothers

http://www.antiwall.com/pictures/asheye.jpg

gail
7th of January 2004 (Wed), 21:56
Pluses and minuses (my humble opinion only, please take as constructive criticism)

- Eyelashes are cropped at upper right hand corner of picture.

- Part of the eyebrow is showing and detracts from the subject (the eye, I assume)

- Color saturation a little low. When shooting color, either punch it way up, punch it way down, or do black and white. "Normal" color is boring these days... everybody does it.

+ Your focus is good.

Tips:
What is your subject? Decide what it is, and include only elements in your picture that will enhance the subject, not detract from it.

Cheers,
E. Martin


Thanks E. Martin, I was just experimenting with this shot. I no it wasn't nothing good LOL. I was just playing around with it. to see if I could get a better focus shot. This was my first try at this. maybe next one will be better hopefully. But I appreciate your comments, they always help to let me no what I'm doing wrong and to try and correct it next time. Thanks Hugs Gail,