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JWesevich
20th of October 2006 (Fri), 21:40
Hi All!
I took a number of shots at the Borodino battlefield in Russia, and am not sure if I'm on the right track on pp. Does this look reasonable for a "record pic?"
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/jeff_w_47/north_from_righthand_fleche.jpg
thanks!
jeff
Pete
21st of October 2006 (Sat), 04:24
Hi and welcome to POTN!!
I can't see too much that says "battlefield" to me in that shot, but maybe a BW conversion would help that. It also seems to be a bit of a small battle field (I can't imagine tanks would take that long to get across it). Have you any more shots that would create a context?
Fairly good PP work on that particular shot though.
JWesevich
21st of October 2006 (Sat), 07:17
Thanks for the feedback Pete!
The photos are meant to show views of (and from) various parts of the field for miniatures gamers primarily, so the composition is, as you rightly point out, something less than martial. :-)
I was very unsure about the post work, but I'll continue with it now.
jeff
Pete
21st of October 2006 (Sat), 07:58
Ah.. I understand completely now. I'd like to see the rest of the series though. Looks like an interesting project...
JWesevich
21st of October 2006 (Sat), 17:25
Sure Pete:
http://s142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/jeff_w_47/
I got in a rush to get them all up today, but I can fix at leisure I guess... :-)
jeff
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