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acano
22nd of October 2006 (Sun), 14:02
Tryed something new today and this is what i came up with please be truthfull.
http://www.pbase.com/acano/image/68982745.jpg
Broncobear
22nd of October 2006 (Sun), 14:02
A bit harsh on the eyes to look at
odvdveer
22nd of October 2006 (Sun), 15:10
I don't like it. It looks like a badly scanned image from a newspaper. Sorry.
Olga
tlc
22nd of October 2006 (Sun), 15:20
i think it would work with different composition - it seems to be a bit of a dramatic process, so it needs a more dramatic subject - a couple headstones, no, but maybe a close up of an angel off of a headstone or just a close up of a headstone, etc.
do you get my drift?
braduardo
22nd of October 2006 (Sun), 15:35
It would also help to get the horizon straight.
SanderH
22nd of October 2006 (Sun), 15:51
What is it you were trying to accomplish? What did you do? As an effect it's good except for the regions on the headstones where there is no "noise" but only patches of different shades. Try adding some noise to the areas or feather the edges of the patches.
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