Critique Please!

[ECSouljah]

Just got my 580ex today and was having some fun with it. The first one I took was with the flash, the 2nd one was with no flash.

http://static.flickr.com/95/280192337_7e0b3588ec_o.jpg

http://static.flickr.com/96/280192336_b93724a63b_o.jpg

thanks,
Ben

[eos_o_eos]

First shot is good and has fantastic perspective. Really liking this one. Shame paper seems so blank and catches the eye.

[dabluedevil]

#1 Great perspective, but that light in the right corner being blown pulls my eyes away.
#2 I've seen this picture a thousand times, sorry, it's boring, and something about your PP made it wierd looking.