Thank You! card critique

[JaertX]

This is a thank you postcard composite that I've put together for a bride. On the back of this is a link and password to their images posted online.

Anyway, thought I would post it here and get any comments or critiques you might have. It's already ordered, so if it's complete crap your critique won't save my butt, but it will be appreciated! :)

This is the second time that I've done one of these, so I'm curious to see how it's going to affect sales. First time it didn't seem to make any diffrence.

So we'll see how it works this time.

Thanks for looking!

[Chris71]

I think it looks great, and is a very good idea. Anything to get more sales in my book, is a good idea.

[woffles]

The spacing looks odd on the separate pictures. The two top ones butt against each other while the other two are spaced apart from them at different intervals. The text looks off balance to me also.

[Su-Hannie]

It looks great, I personally put more of their faces, but that's just me.

[dosha]

I like it but 3 out of the 4 pictures are ring shots. Would've liked more pics of the bride and groom. just MHO.

[verty]

its a nice added touch..
but i dont see it jacking up sales too much

[Scott_Quier]

I like the idea as far as it goes. But, I would think that, in addition to the link to the event photos, you might want to consider putting some sort of contact information on the back. For example, place your business name and maybe phone in a lower corner in smaller font. Otherwise, I don't see much here that makes it easy for the addresses of this card to contact you.

Just my $.02

[Mike Reynolds]

great idea and good job on the composite

[sblais]

Interesting montage! But I agree with Woffles that the two bottom pictures should be of the same size and centered in the card (equal spacing with the edge). Since your two top pictures take the full size of the card with no spaces in between, I would probably lower the background picture so we can see it more clearly (and resize it accordingly).

Also, there are three pictures of the ring(s). It is a little too much for me and I would probably change one for another picture of the newlyweds. (I would probably change the top picture of the ring as the two bottom ones show both rings and the dress of the bride).

Just suggestions :) Looks good otherwise!

[suzyb]

For some reason it's the background image that bothers me. I get the idea, but I don't really like having the faces from the picture covered up by other pictures. I like the top images...maybe just arranged differently.