Few detail shots... do they work?

[kevinsyn]

Heres a few detail shots on the most recent wedding. What do guys think? Do they work?
1)
http://nspire.ca/portfolio/uploads/0006_filtered.jpg

2) The bride's Dress... for those who couldn't figure it out!
http://nspire.ca/portfolio/uploads/0005_filtered.jpg

[tim]

1 yes, 2 kindof.

[Yella Fella]

detailed shots tend to work in more PJ albums

[Phil V]

They're nice ....but, what colour was the brides dress?

if it was white the pic's should show it as such.

[Big Mike]

I'd like to see a little more DOF in both shots...more so in the first.

[sblais]

I like them both. I don't think the second one has that much to it, but it has the potential of being a shot that the bride and groom will like, which is an important factor to consider! :) Like it's been mentioned, make sure the WB is done. Even the first pis seems quite warm (better warm than cold, mind you! :))

[kevinsyn]

Thanks for the criticism.

I had a bunch of shots of the dress and this was just a few "creative" shots of me just messing around. The wb on the first shot is right (the room as in all hotels are cream color) which makes it look a little warm. I didn't like the way the dress looked just white so messed aroudn with the wb a bit but I guess phil is right.

[kawter2]

Very nice!