Renboy
2nd of November 2006 (Thu), 04:15
Found this old coffee shop that was surrounded by odd shops. C&C welcomed only because I need it. :lol:
habakuk
6th of November 2006 (Mon), 13:25
ok. Not easy to comment on, but that's no reason not to try. ;)
In both shots, I get a strong feeling for the atmosphere in that shop. It feels old, dust covered, smelly and totally overcrowded. The shots give me a feeling of being somewhere in a area where anything can just jump in my face. Anything!
However, in the first shot, the crop is imho rather unlucky. You cut the sign in the top left and the "hand" of the diver suit, and the visible lines aren't aligned or leveled. So, it has the power to tranport a mood, but it doesn't work for my eye, it doesn't feel "whole". The second shot shows the same problem: you cut off the signs on the left and right side, cut every chair, the bear etc. And the sharpness might need some more work too.
cheers
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