Dice Flash

[Warman]

More experiments with my dice. This time a set of three shots meant to be a sequence. Comments apreciated.

http://bragatel.pt/warman/dice_a.jpg
http://bragatel.pt/warman/dice_b.jpg
http://bragatel.pt/warman/dice_c.jpg

[TeraGram93013]

I like the concept, but something about the series itches me the wrong way.

- I think the dice are too ordered. I feel a random distribution might have played better.

- For the first shot I would have cropped tightly to totally hide where the light source was.

- The third shot is exposed badly such that all the colors are washed out of the front pieces. If those were sharper and more brilliant it would play better to my eye.

[Warman]

I did lots of shots with random distribution and tried to go the other way here. I will try to shoot it again with a random and see how it turns out.
About the light source, i don't know but i kind of like it showing because it reminds me of sunrise.
Totaly agreed about the third shot, partly the bad exposition was the point as a final piece of the set but i guess it didnt turn out that good. I will try to make it sharper and make the front pieces more colorful next time. Thanks for your input.